Archive | August 2011

Fiona Lowe, Bob Mayer & my Argentinean hero

One area I am focussing on with my current WIP is my hero. As a romance writer targeting Mills & Boon Sexy/ Presents Extra I need my hero to literally “walk off the page” and have the reader fall in love with him.

At the recent Melbourne RWA (Aust) conference, I attended a number of workshops but Fiona Lowe’s “Writing the Male Point of View” and Bob Mayer’s “Character” had me thinking about my hero in a different light.

From Bob –

  • “Heroism is taking action in the face of fear”
  • My hero (character) at the end of the story must act differently than he would have at the beginning of the book.

From Fiona –

Aside from the brilliant excerpts from “Couplings” which had the room in fits of laughter, she shared the following –

  • Men talk about what they do rather than what they feel
  • Generally women are more empathetic than men. So for my hero, he can improve his empathy and connect with his feelings but it will be the heroine who can help him to do this.

So joining what Fiona and Bob said, something new for my hero will be his changes in empathy. Currently, his beliefs are based on emotions from when he was a young teenager and he is reluctant to change (he believes he is right). With the help of the heroine he will learn to be more empathetic and see the situation from an adult’s perspective. At the end of the book he will be different from the beginning.

SNAP! Thanks Fiona and Bob – I’ve added an extra layer to my gorgeous hero which I hope the editor will love.

Did anyone else have one of those lightbulb moments at RWA? I’d love to hear them.



I’ve been very lucky to have my two gorgeous teenage cousins, from overseas, staying with us for a few days. Last night we were watching their favourite you tube clips on TV which was a lot fun.

It’s always good to learn something new and I learnt from them a new term – Songify! An app which can turn words into a song!  I felt a little old not knowing this since apparently “everyone” knows this (their speak not mine).

Here is my favourite which had my cousin and I laughing out loud.

Note to self – how can I include this in a book?


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RWA Conference 2011

Over the past weekend, I was delighted to be able to attend the RWA conference held in Melbourne. It was brilliantly organised by Bronwyn, Louise and a sensational committee.

It was fantastic to catch up with my crit partners and writing buddies as well as having the opportunity to chat with the published authors.

There were sensational speakers and workshops and I leant a lot over the 3 days.

There was also much fun to be had at the Roaring 20s cocktail party and Awards Night. It was a thrill to see my crit partner, Emmie Dark not only MC the evening but win an award. Kudos also to my other gorgeous crit partner for her placing in the STALI.

I feel totally energised from the weekend and can’t wait to write more.

This entry was posted on 17/08/2011.